July 26, 2007

Civility

We (plain language advocates) always advise that you avoid negative sentence constructions and seek the positive form of your message.

But I always find it difficult to do this.Dilbert’s Scott Adams has offered this example today:

Politeness

By Scott_Adams on General Nonsense

Recently I saw a sign outside a store that said, “Please enjoy our food and drinks outside.” It seemed so much nicer than the more direct “No food and drinks.”

Read Adams’ full post here.

July 23, 2007

Diversity Series: Learning Styles

Why are learning styles relevant to this Diversity Series?

Because a person’s preferred learning style tells a lot about their information-processing style and how best to communicate information to that person.

In terms of interpersonal relations, you gain a great advantage by knowing your own and the other person’s preferred styles.

As a professional communicator, you can consider this another tool available to you to understand your audience. You can review a communication to consider how to make it easier for people of each learning style.

To learn your own style, do the online test at A Learning Style Survey for College.

The four styles used in that survey:

  1. The Visual/ Verbal
  2. The Visual/ Nonverbal
  3. The Tactile/ Kinesthetic
  4. The Auditory/ Verbal

are explained at


The Four Learning Styles in the DVC Survey

Others have written about the learning style issue, so you can look at the other approaches here:

  1. Kolb Learning Styles: www.infed.org/biblio/b-explrn.htm
  2. Honey & Mumford Learning Styles: http://www.campaign-for-learning.org.uk/aboutyourlearning/whatlearning.htm
  3. 4MAT: http://www.aboutlearning.com/all-about-4mat.htm

July 16, 2007

Diversity series – 3

Get to know your readers

Your aim is a document planned so you can give the same answer to each of these three questions

* Who is able to read this?

* Who is likely to read this?

* Who needs to read this?

Working with limited funds or public funds, you may try to write for “the widest possible audience“. Everybody” or “anybody” is a difficult audience. There is no “general public” for plain language writing. Just try to picture a member of the general public. Some probing questions and basic investigation will help you narrow the focus of your project and get your real readers in mind.

You need to explore your intended audiences’ characteristics, needs and expectations. With the information you gather, you can write and design your document to

* reflect the readers’ concerns and daily life

* use familiar words, phrases and ideas

* use an acceptable tone that suits the reader and the message

You want to discover these features of your audience:

age range gender issues

first language family structure

education cultural traditions

reading abilities math abilities

familiarity with the subject matter biases, sensitivities

familiarity with any special language self-image

attitude toward topic motivation

physical, mental or emotional challenges specific interests and concerns

July 13, 2007

Writer, reader, place: writing with ho’okipa

I will simply refer you onward to an article at Talking Story by Say Leadership Coaching about the civility and respect that should anchor your plain language:

Writer, reader, place: writing with ho’okipa

July 10, 2007

Literacy Challenges to Delivering Administrative Justice


In May, I presented at the Council of Canadian Administrative Tribunal’s 4th International Conference, in Vancouver, British Columbia – “Administrative Justice Without Borders”.

I had been working with the CCAT for some 18 months on this issue. CCAT released a book at the conference on plain language and administrative practice. It will be available soon online.

Our handout at the conference was a 12-page summary of the previous publication by the Literacy and Access to Justice Project. That is is now available here. The 100-page original is available here.

Some pictures are here; not great pix because of the blinding Vancouver sun!

July 8, 2007

This is how to do PowerPoint

Carolyn Elefant brought this to my attention, so I bring it to yours.

This is how you are supposed to use PowerPoint in a presentation or in front of the jury:

Matt Homann of the [Non]billable Hour shows how to build an innovative law firm.

His presentation also shows how to use PowerPoint and Slideshare to best advantage.

The visuals arouse emotion or a memory with an emotion. The words are minimal. The PowerPoint sets a mood for the speaker’s presentation–although this one stands on its own!

July 6, 2007

Diversity series


cartoon from www.weblogcartoons.com

Cartoon by Dave Walker. Find more cartoons you can freely re-use on your blog at We Blog Cartoons.

July 2, 2007

Be Real; Be Confident

I have discovered a blogger on my own wavelength. Joanna Young has a new post about writing with rapport. You should read it!

But first, here is her definition of rapport:

What do we mean by rapport?

Rapport is fundamental to all coaching and NLP. The thesaurus definition of rapport is:

  • a relation of mutual understanding or trust and agreement between people
  • a feeling of sympathetic understanding
  • sympathetic compatibility

I’d highlight a few important words from that definition:

Relation… between people. It’s not something one person ‘does’ to another. It exists between people.

Trust.
Rapport is connected to but not the same as trust. Rapport can be built (and lost) quickly. Trust takes time.

Feeling.
There’s often a ‘feeling’ of connection with someone – but you might not be able to put your finger on why, or how

So rapport is all about the relationship between people. Although there are things that you can do to build rapport you cannot manipulate another person into feeling it. To build rapport you also need to let yourself be open to influence – and to respect the other person that you are communicating with.

You can create rapport by relating to people in a way that creates a climate of trust and understanding. Although we can learn ways to build and create rapport it is important to remember that rapport is natural. It is integral to human communication.

As Joseph O’Connor reminds us: “we do not need to create it as much as stop doing what could be preventing it…”

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Here is her article on Writing with Rapport: Be Real at Confident Writing.